Well it’s true that you used me.
I suppose, I let it happen.
Making habit out of this cycle.
This cyclical abuse.
It became quite comfy really.
So I find myself now conscious.
Making sure I take note.
To be uncomfortable,
when in this state of comfort.
But why, do you ask “why?”?
“What do you consider fallacy?”
I consider it a fallacy:
To calcify bones.
To reinforce steel.
To drown sorrows.
To victimize.
But you couldn’t understand.
No really, you couldn’t.
Trust me.
But I appreciate the effort.


18 Responses to “Handcrafting”

  1. 1 Gally June 16, 2010 at 12:24 pm

    Great poem. I also like your D20 and your reference to Stargate ;3 Geeks = uber.

  2. 3 brian June 16, 2010 at 1:51 pm

    there are many that get comfortable with that abuse…that much i do understand…

  3. 5 D.S. Lear June 16, 2010 at 2:08 pm

    Making sure I take note.
    To be uncomfortable,
    when in this state of comfort.

    Awesome lines! Nice writing!

  4. 7 Emmanuel Ibok June 16, 2010 at 2:16 pm

    Lol…got lost trying to get where your coming from but it was a great read. nice work. Cheers

  5. 11 Morganna June 17, 2010 at 4:41 pm

    Thank you for sharing. A vivid, powerful poem.

  6. 13 Jingle June 18, 2010 at 4:02 am

    Please return favors to poets who were here,
    Thank you in advance…
    everyone needs encouragement…
    Happy Friday!

    I have sent this to every poet in my list.

  7. 15 Alexandria June 18, 2010 at 6:49 am

    I understand the whole cycle syndrome – great job

  8. 16 Alex June 19, 2010 at 2:47 pm

    Great Poem Saran, really touching. keep up the good work!

  9. 18 hoiden June 19, 2010 at 6:39 pm

    dint get it in between..but after i read it again i cud…great poem:)

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